我很高的英語？I'm tall,so is my friend,but it's difference between my hair and his.I have short straight hair，那么，我很高的英語？一起來了解一下吧。
I have tall body最好改成I'm tall.然后再是I have……。 bananas, yellow, monkey的話三個放在一起沒什么聯系，從語法角度，是沒錯，但讀起來不是很習慣。最好改成 I like bananas and monkey .my favourite color is yellow.
bedroom have a telephone It grey這句話存在問題，可以改為i have a telephone in the bedroom .the colour is Grey
你先看看這樣，行不。不知道有些詞匯運用是否超過三年級水平。我再幫你改改
Self introduction
Good morning my dearest judges. I’m honored to be here and I willing to make good use of this change. Now I’d like to introduction myself. You can call me Harry. I come from Yucai primary school. I have many subjects such as: Chinese Math English. I can do well in English and Math. I can speak English very well.
And I have some hobbies. I like playing football and running. Because they can make me strong. I also like reading, because it can be edifying. I am an outgoing boy who likes making friends what is more, I `m ready to help others. So I have got many friends.
Such is me a hard working and considerate boy. That’s all thank you.
例文
Myself （我自己）
My name is ChenXiaoye(陳小葉，參考一下，姓和名分開，姓和名首字母要大寫）. I’m nine. I am tall（我很高）.I havetwo big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas . I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom.There is a greytelephone,two browndesks and two yellow chairsin my bedroom.（某地有某物用there be句型:某人有某物用have/has)
I have a big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has an old face. He lovesapple. My grandmother is an old kindly lady(長的形容詞放短的后面）. She has a big body. She loves grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has athin body. She likes peach.
My teacher is tall and thin. She has athin body. SheteachesusEnglish. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat . It has abig body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.
I lovemy family.
希望能幫到您！
I have tall body
雖然沒語法錯誤 但是還有點怪怪的 改成 I am tall.
I like bananas, yellow, monkey.
monkey 可數名詞加 s
bedroom have a telephone It grey,
it grey 主謂賓 缺少一個謂語 is
two desk It a brown a yellow,
desk后加sIt a brown a yellow有點怪怪的 改成
This is brown and that is yellow.
and two chair It black.
改成 and two chairs It is black.
He love apple.
改成He loves apples.
還有很多 名詞沒有加s 第三人稱也要加s
自己再看看吧
話說 LZ的作文好干癟癟的 畢竟你才三年級
多寫點作文 多看點作文 多問問老師
好了 祝你學習進步哦
(看我碼了這么多字 就采納我的吧 謝謝咯)
I am rather tall and thin.
I am very tall andbony.
以上就是我很高的英語的全部內容，但讀起來不是很習慣。最好改成 I like bananas and monkey .my favourite color is yellow.bedroom have a telephone It grey這句話存在問題，可以改為i have a telephone in the bedroom .the colour is Grey 你先看看這樣，行不。不知道有些詞匯運用是否超過三年級水平。內容來源于互聯網，信息真偽需自行辨別。如有侵權請聯系刪除。
